くろいそら
ポツポツポツポツ
ふゆのあめ
- My first haiku is about a rainy winter day. "ポツポツ" expressing the sound of rain falling. It is an example of the use of カタカナ for onomatopoeic expressions.
カラオケで
クラスのみんなど
あそびましょう
- In my second haiku, I'm inviting you (the reader) to go a karaoke with all our classmates and have some fun!
もうふゆです！
もうすぐきます
クリスマス
- In my third haiku, I wrote about how it's almost Christmas!
I really like your first haiku because you use the onomatopoeia ”ポツポツ。” あめのおとがすきです！
ReplyDeleteすぎですね。とてもきれいなはいくです。
ReplyDeleteI like your first haiku as it is very symmetric and is in tune with the current weather right now.
ReplyDeleteすごいですね。ふゆが いちばん すてきです。